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-- Posted by amber1991 at 10:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008
I made a promise to you that I intend to keep no matter how I struggle I can't reach defeat you mean too much to me to throw it all away I can't say goodbye I can't say it today I have to keep breathing talking to you this can't be the end we can't really be through I won't let you go I'll hold on tight I won't give up not without a fight
-- Posted by sosupkthnx at 10:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008
you dont reach defeat.....so no, its not good
-- Posted by Miss Vanity at 10:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008
Cute
-- Posted by smalltowngirl9 at 10:54 am on Dec. 30, 2008
good jobb
-- Posted by EmmitWinchell at 10:55 am on Dec. 30, 2008
well worded I like it.
-- Posted by mOaTiLliAta at 10:55 am on Dec. 30, 2008
elementary but acceptable
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