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-- Posted by amber1991 at 10:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008

I made a promise to you
that I intend to keep
no matter how I struggle
I can't reach defeat
you mean too much to me
to throw it all away
I can't say goodbye
I can't say it today
I have to keep breathing
talking to you
this can't be the end
we can't really be through
I won't let you go
I'll hold on tight
I won't give up
not without a fight


-- Posted by sosupkthnx at 10:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008

you dont reach defeat.....so no, its not good


-- Posted by Miss Vanity at 10:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008

Cute


-- Posted by smalltowngirl9 at 10:54 am on Dec. 30, 2008

good jobb


-- Posted by EmmitWinchell at 10:55 am on Dec. 30, 2008

well worded I like it.


-- Posted by mOaTiLliAta at 10:55 am on Dec. 30, 2008

elementary but acceptable


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