-- Posted by tragic romance at 4:36 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 Welcome to the black parade,   This razor blade masquerade,   Keep a woman dangling from a string until you are certain you've another hooked,   And for all of this, I hope your line breaks!     Wanting so desperately someone in my life,   But so fearful to make it for all of the wrong reasons,   Knowing I couldn't stand to put someone through that.     "Wait until you're older, relationships are just fun and games when you're young"   And what does that say for all of you?   For the woman signing her divorce papers in her wedding gown?     The truth is we all have hearts, to love and to hurt.   Men do to women, what women do to men.   What's a teenage love affair holds truth throughout life.   Commitment dances in a lover's eyes, a mockery, a mischievous smile. -- Posted by JeanClaude at 4:37 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 You're gonna be a STAR -- Posted by xBeautifulTragedyx at 4:37 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 Well that's fun. -- Posted by glowinthedark at 4:37 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 I thought this was regarding the song All These Things I Hate by Bullet For My Valentine. -- Posted by acausedelle at 4:38 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 Uhhh no. -- Posted by Lord Cat at 4:38 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 Whatever ,your poem...is kinda childish... -- Posted by dramaqueenxoxo at 4:38 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 Very, um, commercial -- Posted by tragic romance at 4:39 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 Quote: from Lord Cat at 4:38 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 Whatever ,your poem...is kinda childish... It was spur of the moment when I was pissed at my dad. My other poems seem to be too much for others to handle. I can't win. -- Posted by h a t t at 4:40 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 seams. and not bad. -- Posted by Rebecca1422 at 4:41 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 sorry (sp.) *seams -- Posted by Miss Vanity at 4:42 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 Not bad.