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-- Posted by danndivision at 12:45 pm on Jan. 2, 2009
One day, every day is how it always seemed every moment i saw her her eyes always seemed to gleam I love seeing her even if we don't talk I just stand there doing nothing while the walls seem to gawk felt bored and felt like writing a poem, is it decent? if not how can I change it?
-- Posted by ixcantxspellxsry at 11:34 am on Jan. 3, 2009
I liked it but it kinda didn't seem finished like i think shes radiant beyond comapre but thats it it kinda just stops.
-- Posted by danndivision at 11:37 am on Jan. 3, 2009
I guess,,, i just dont knwo what else to add to it
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