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-- Posted by naturechild at 12:10 am on Jan. 8, 2009

Swirling minutes with nothing to show
Long days with long hours and I still don't know...
What he thinks, and it makes me want to break down and cry
I'm still so upset but I can't figure out why.

Trudging from here to there all the same
We wear the same faces of anguish and pain.
I look down and avoid seeing any faces because
It's seeing him around that I'm afraid of.

Staying silent at jokes I once thought were funny
Hating the sky when the day turns out sunny.
I'm an old book, my pages are torn,
I'm unwanted and used, so heavily worn.

I step everyday with the same and sad stride,
In each step lies a tear from the river's I've cried.
The simplest things become harder to do
Everything's been this way, since I lost you.


-- Posted by californication at 12:14 am on Jan. 8, 2009

I like it


-- Posted by My Dreams WILL Wait at 12:20 am on Jan. 8, 2009

Nice...It's deep. I see feelings in that poem aww


-- Posted by heartless goddess at 1:11 am on Jan. 8, 2009

ouch..i can relate..:(


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