-- Posted by Anonymous at 7:45 am on Jan. 8, 2009 They're actually lyrics, but whatever. Rate them. Tell me if they're shitty or not. If enough people think they're not shitty, I might put them to music and such for people to hear. (Note: I know it's set up sort of weird in that there's not really a true chorus. I wanted it symmetrical so that the song has an actual center, if that makes sense. Right now it's ABABCDB, and then backwards from there. But I might change it at a later time so that it repeats instead of going backwards, and then add another B verse at the end. Most of you probably have no idea what I just said.) Anon. for protection of self in case this completely sucks Where were you when I was lost And when I was finally found? You stayed away at any cost And I couldn't find solid ground Breathe me in, But don't take my hand I'll let go. You would know. There comes a day we all must pay For all the wrongs we've done And I'm not sure, but I think yours Are too much for anyone Break me up But don't write me off 'Cause you can bet I'm not done yet Will you ever see? You just can't keep up with me I tried to tell you once before But you keep coming back for more Never will I wander Never will I roam No more going under I'll walk these roads alone Take me away But don't think I'll stay I'm not yours Anymore I will let you wander I will let you roam You'll be torn asunder You'll be on your own Will you ever see? You just can't keep up with me I tried to tell you once before But you keep coming back for more Beg me, please Just get on your knees I'll take you back But I'll leave you just as fast Where will I be when you are lost When you are finally found? Will I care, will I be there? Will I make a single sound? Scream for me Then just let me be I'll forsake Anyway If you need me, you know where I'll be Just as close as I need to get To hear you cry, to hear you lie I still don't miss you yet -- Posted by Shania1 at 7:46 am on Jan. 8, 2009 good!:) -- Posted by MystiqueBeauty16 at 7:46 am on Jan. 8, 2009 I like it. -- Posted by flufferbunkers at 7:46 am on Jan. 8, 2009 That is veryy nice. You have talent. You should write me a songggg, or a poem. =] -- Posted by PreppyPeyton at 7:46 am on Jan. 8, 2009 Cool. -- Posted by atomictastic at 7:47 am on Jan. 8, 2009 Beautiful. -- Posted by friendlyfrenchfry at 7:48 am on Jan. 8, 2009 i loveeee them!!!!!!!!!! -- Posted by seniorgeek at 10:20 am on Jan. 8, 2009 Hmmmm! -- Posted by xroses are redx at 3:04 pm on Jan. 8, 2009 Veryy nice   =] -- Posted by MilesSoftball at 4:32 pm on Jan. 8, 2009 Like it.