-- Posted by xoximperfection at 11:50 pm on Jan. 8, 2009 Please comment, and be honest, i don't mind criticism. when i close my eyes storm clouds swirl a roar of thunder rumbles from my gut and my heart feels as if lightning struck how do i escape this world escape the pain that everyday brings the pain i have brought on myself by choices ive made there is no way out i see but i can be numb free myself for a day or two let myself crash and burn once again knowing i may not have the strength to stop myself knowing that nobody will catch me when i fall nobody to hold me tight whisper in my ear "everything will be alright, my dear" nobody to love me for who i am to help me take the right path so that i can make the choices of who i am and who i can, with time, be -- Posted by Jman19 at 11:55 pm on Jan. 8, 2009 Pretty good.. would be better if you used punctuation and proper grammar. -- Posted by Elisee at 11:55 pm on Jan. 8, 2009 Its really good! I likee it -- Posted by xoximperfection at 11:56 pm on Jan. 8, 2009 Quote: from Jman19 at 11:55 pm on Jan. 8, 2009 Pretty good.. would be better if you used punctuation and proper grammar. mehh, too tired right now     -- Posted by Jman19 at 11:57 pm on Jan. 8, 2009 Quote: from xoximperfection at 8:56 pm on Jan. 9, 2009 Quote: from Jman19 at 11:55 pm on Jan. 8, 2009 Pretty good.. would be better if you used punctuation and proper grammar. mehh, too tired right now lol. Fair enough. -- Posted by CuntFace at 12:01 am on Jan. 9, 2009 emo but i guess thats what you were shooting for, so yea its good