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-- Posted by August Rush at 9:01 am on June 19, 2009

Any criticisms so far? It's just a holding page, but I need it to look professional because i'm going to be approaching companies for free products, so I need them to take it seriously.

Positive and negative criticisms welcome, but please make sure their constructive.

http://tinyurl.com/kv23d5


-- Posted by Hi Jack at 9:02 am on June 19, 2009

I liek.


-- Posted by Chasey at 9:05 am on June 19, 2009

Naice


-- Posted by anonomouse at 1:05 am on June 29, 2009

Looks good so far. There are a few things that you could improve (this is just my taste, so you can do whatever you want):

  • Do something more creative with the logo. The grunge-style font doesn't really stand out and it is... typical
  • The badge in the lower right looks like standard web 2.0. That's not bad, it's just like a cliche now
  • I really like how you remembered to add a favicon! And if you programmed it in an IDE (like dreamweaver) you did not leave any mark of that in the html and the code is very clean and tidy.


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