Pages: 1 2  Next -- Posted by Natsy at 4:28 am on June 27, 2009 I actually cried, I was laughing so much ENJOY! Duskiness Edward leaned toward me, his perfect face inches from mine. His sweet, delicious breath ghosted over my face. His golden eyes glowed with love. "How do you like it?" he whispered, his velvet voice purring in my ear. I couldn't respond, so dazzled was I by his sparkling skin. He shone like a diamond in the sun, a godlike creature before me. He smirked at my befuddlement, but then his face darkened and he thundered, "Don't be difficult, Bella!" I cringed, but he instantly softened, chuckled his bell-like laugh, and leaned toward me again. His cold, pale fingers brushed my cheek. I stopped breathing. "Come here," he said, bounding up in one of those blindingly-fast movements I'd grown accustomed to. "I want to show you something." He led me to a small creek and sank gracefully into the grass at its edge. I tripped over a pebble and landed on my face in the mud. Edward laughed. How could he love me? He was so beautiful, gorgeous, and perfect. Like the statue of David come alive. Like Adonis, a god, an angel. Edward removed his shoes and rolled up the cuffs of his jeans, and I gasped at the sight of his white, smooth ankles. Sunlight reflected off his toenails, each an ivory glint of perfection. I'd never seen Edward's feet before. I hadn't realized he could be more beautiful than he was, but there seemed no end to his beauty. My heart beat madly in my chest, bounced up into my throat, ricocheted off half a dozen ribs, and finally settled somewhere in the vicinity of my kneecap. I collapsed. Faster than a speeding bullet, Edward had lifted me in his marble arms and cradled me to his granite chest. "Bella? Bella!" he screamed. "No!" The sight of his perfect, glorious face so twisted in anguish sent waves of torture through my body. "Edward!" I gasped. His cold, unyielding lips pressed to mine, but I dared not move for fear of breaking his control, so irresistible did he find the scent of my blood. I could not bear knowing I had caused Edward pain by forcing him to eat me. My heart fluttered around my kneecap. The kiss done, Edward set me on my feet. Without moving, I tripped over a stick and would have fallen in the stream had Edward not caught me in his iron embrace. "Will you answer a question?" I asked. "Of course, my love, my life, my forever," Edward said, casually tearing boulders apart with his toes. I watched, spellbound for a moment, before remembering myself. "I once asked if you could turn into a bat, and you just laughed." Edward smirked. "Because it was a stupid question. We don't turn into bats. Why would we want to turn into bats?" "But can you turn into something?" "Of course." He stood, stretched, and his shirt rose enough for me to catch a glimpse of his sculpted abs above his waistband. I hyperventilated and passed out. When I awoke, Edward was speaking. "—for disguise." "What?" I asked breathlessly. "I said, we turn into fruit. It's great for disguising yourself." He watched me carefully, to see if this revelation would finally be the one that convinced me he was a monster, that sent me screaming from him. "Oh." I said. "What kind of fruit?" He looked frustrated, annoyed, euphoric, scared, nervous, grumpy, amused, sleepy, and sad. Like an archangel come down from heaven to bless me with his presence. "An apple." "Oh. Can I see?" Rage colored his features. "No! Why can't you understand? I'm a danger to you! I could kill you! I should leave you forever!" He threw himself forward and wrapped his arms around me. "I should go - right now! It's the only way to keep you safe!" Despair settled over me, so thick and heavy I could hardly see. "No, Edward! Don't leave me! I know we've only been together for three hours, but I want to spend forever with you! Please!" He pulled back and looked at me, thousands of emotions roiling in his liquid topaz eyes. "Do you mean that, Bella?" "Yes." "Very well." His perfect, glorious, heavenly face dipped toward me, and he touched his cold lips to my neck. He growled deep in his throat, a sound that traveled up and down my spine like lightning. Then came a sharp pain. His grip tightened. I gasped his name. My sight dimmed until all I could see was the sparkle of his skin, calling me to paradise. Then nothing. **** Edward looked down at the body of Bella Swan, pale and lifeless in his pale and lifeless arms. "Oops." His sobs shook the forest for six long seconds, and then he stood, wiping a drop of blood from the corner of his mouth. "Yum." He sprinted for the edge of the forest, moving faster than any living creature, and wondered if that Angela girl would be his new lab partner. The End! -- Posted by Chasey at 4:32 am on June 27, 2009 I lol'd -- Posted by SoaringFalcon2010 at 4:33 am on June 27, 2009 =/ -- Posted by TechnoShark at 4:34 am on June 27, 2009 Hahhahaaa.a Love it. -- Posted by Dr Gregory House at 4:35 am on June 27, 2009 Two thumbs up! - Ebert & Roeper. An instant classic! - The New York Times This is what the books should have been like. - J.K. Rowling Majestic & engaging. I felt like I was THERE! - Barack Obama -- Posted by ElectricLadyFlash at 4:38 am on June 27, 2009 HAHA! That was fucked up. Fanbitches must be crying~ -- Posted by cherryD at 4:39 am on June 27, 2009 AHAHAHA. -- Posted by cettemoi at 5:10 am on June 27, 2009 hehe......i love it..it's sooo funny -- Posted by kitKAT55 at 5:29 am on June 27, 2009 its soo funni. i laughed -- Posted by The Last Magister at 7:11 am on June 27, 2009 LOL -- Posted by Marty3 at 9:23 am on June 27, 2009 lol -- Posted by Chava at 9:49 am on June 27, 2009 lol -- Posted by deAth trAp at 9:51 am on June 27, 2009 That was fucking amazingly hilarious.<3 -- Posted by Ska Ninja at 11:15 am on June 27, 2009 HAHAHAHAHAHA awesome -- Posted by Sexy 69 at 11:38 am on June 27, 2009 This is hilarious. -- Posted by Zadkiel at 2:58 pm on June 27, 2009 WALL OF TEXT -- Posted by TheAntiBarbie at 3:13 pm on June 27, 2009 Haha. Very nice. -- Posted by BrittneyNicolle at 5:55 pm on June 27, 2009 Hahahahahahahahahahaha. -- Posted by ConfusedOne05 at 10:20 pm on June 27, 2009 Haha...that was hilarious. -- Posted by heidie at 3:59 am on June 28, 2009 That was hilarious! Surprisingly close to the books, pretty much a summary. -- Posted by geonah at 8:38 pm on June 30, 2009 That was fucking stupid. Not funny at all. -- Posted by deerheart at 3:18 am on July 9, 2009 "Of course, my love, my life, my forever," Edward said, casually tearing boulders apart with his toes. ^^ and that was the point at which I started giggling uncontrollably xD -- Posted by deerheart at 3:18 am on July 9, 2009 "Of course, my love, my life, my forever," Edward said, casually tearing boulders apart with his toes. ^^ and that was the point at which I started giggling uncontrollably xD -- Posted by celestial doubt at 11:31 am on July 19, 2009 Haha, excellent. This parody really displays how vain, silly, idealized, and shallow Twilight really is. I don't know how people actually read those books... they make me sick. Well done! Assuming you wrote it, anyhow. -- Posted by Areola at 10:36 am on Aug. 9, 2009 That's quite amusing. -- Posted by TK93 at 4:02 pm on Aug. 19, 2009 Lol, wow. -- Posted by Violently Happy at 4:58 am on Aug. 22, 2009 die Bella die lol -- Posted by Live Just To Die at 3:27 pm on Aug. 24, 2009 Fucking perfect. -- Posted by ibanez at 4:05 am on Aug. 28, 2009 Fucking lol'd! -- Posted by Sety at 2:16 pm on Sep. 1, 2009 the rest of the Twi-hards are gonna kill me for saying this but that was hilarious! XD Im actually reading some parodies from twifail.com =/ now i feel guilty Pages: 1 2  Next