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-- Posted by Jamezy5 at 6:03 pm on July 5, 2009

i will kick your ass
will my knuckles of brass

i will shoot you in da head
untill you are dead

i will go up to your gang with a pistol
and i will shoot at dem all

i will hunt you with my machine gun
dam when you hear me you better run

you WILL die with a bullet
from a game of russian roulette

you life clock goes tick tock tick TOCK
am a kill you with ma glock

am a say good bye the way i plan
i run you over with my Van


-- Posted by deuces13 at 6:03 pm on July 5, 2009

lol


-- Posted by Descartes at 6:04 pm on July 5, 2009

Terrible. But I lol'd


-- Posted by The Mixed Tape at 6:04 pm on July 5, 2009

Bullet and roulette don't rhyme.


-- Posted by newmie66 at 6:04 pm on July 5, 2009

Violent!


-- Posted by DuBBy at 6:05 pm on July 5, 2009

Quote: from Descartes at 8:04 pm on July 5, 2009


Terrible. But I lol'd
Dis^


-- Posted by Dylan Brittain at 6:05 pm on July 5, 2009

I found this hilarious.

And sort of poorly wrote.


-- Posted by devilmaycrydude at 6:05 pm on July 5, 2009

lmao.


-- Posted by jack8714 at 6:06 pm on July 5, 2009

Quote: from Descartes at 6:04 pm on July 5, 2009


Terrible. But I lol'd


-- Posted by ehmusic at 6:08 pm on July 5, 2009

Quote: from Dylan Brittain at 9:05 pm on July 5, 2009


I found this hilarious.

And sort of poorly wrote.



*written


OP: that was, only slightly, funny.  Very poorly written, with a rhyme scheme from hell.


-- Posted by Skullie at 6:08 pm on July 5, 2009

.......i dont know what 2 say


-- Posted by aagrlc21 at 6:11 pm on July 5, 2009

Lol, harsh.


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