Pages: 1 2  Next -- Posted by heavyrhythm at 1:38 pm on July 9, 2009 So this poem is about how stupid I think it is for people to cut themselves. If putting yourself through more pain to avoid another type of pain is all you have left... Talk to someone. Do something. Your wrists are bleeding And now you are pleading Please don't take my life away You wish you could go back But now as it turns black You watch as the colors will fade From what you do Because of you You'll end your life And ruin theirs too You've got to stop While you're still on the top Before things get carried away But now you've gone to far In the back of the black car Your parents are crying Your best friend is lying Says that she had no idea Your wrists are bleeding And now you are pleading Please don't take my life away -- Posted by DaisyMontana at 1:39 pm on July 9, 2009 You shouldn't write a poem about it -- Posted by Dannyjoe1000 at 1:40 pm on July 9, 2009 Yeah self harms fuckin awesome -- Posted by XxRedneckBitchxX at 1:40 pm on July 9, 2009 Go to sleep and close your teary eyes Never again wake to see the night Hush little girl don't you dare cry Sit back and enjoy your final night Here we are once again All alone with no friends They let you bleed and said not a word Not really knowing how depression hurts A Cutters' Lullaby Screaming in your ear All the things you hate to hear The names the accusations and suggestions Suffering from hard learned lessons Can anybody hear you now? Your mouth is open, tihnk you are screaming so loud But a sound doesnt escape your pretty lips And you just let the knife slip A Cutters' Lullaby Can anyone see her here? Down on her knees and the end so near Invisible in such a crowded place Eyes just sliding over her tear streaked place Under the shadow of the steeple Passed by the forgiven people Holding the razor so close, and in her hand her final letter All these people who never even met her A Cutters' Lullaby I sit here with nothing to hold on to But this blade and you want to take that away too I am alone and I have nowhere to turn How many lessons must I be forced to learn? And in the dead silence on the night I hear the sounds of my own distant cries Singing a tune noone else seems to know And its one I wish I never had to know A Cutters' Lullaby -- Posted by Areola at 1:41 pm on July 9, 2009 Null, because there is no "you fucking suck dick bitch" option. I hate shit like this. It's awful. So much rhyming I could puke. And don't bash cutters, you don't know their personal problems. -- Posted by heavyrhythm at 1:42 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:41 pm on July 9, 2009 Null, because there is no "you fucking suck dick bitch" option. I hate shit like this. It's awful. So much rhyming I could puke. And don't bash cutters, you don't know their personal problems. I take it you are one?? -- Posted by Kaijuu at 1:42 pm on July 9, 2009 Talking does not help everyone -- Posted by heavyrhythm at 1:43 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Kaijuu at 1:42 pm on July 9, 2009 Talking does not help everyone But leaving PERMANENT scars for TEMPORARY problems is stupid IMO. -- Posted by Thanantos at 1:43 pm on July 9, 2009 I think that is what they think 9x outa 10 -- Posted by Areola at 1:43 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 4:42 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:41 pm on July 9, 2009 Null, because there is no "you fucking suck dick bitch" option.    I hate shit like this.    It's awful. So much rhyming I could puke.    And don't bash cutters, you don't know their personal problems. I take it you are one?? Are "one"? Like it's a group. Do not talk to me if you are ignorant to the subject you are trying to prove a point on. -- Posted by Just Waiting Here at 1:44 pm on July 9, 2009 It was alright... sounded like there was too much forced rhyming (choosing words, just because they rhyme).  I liked the first three lines. But I also don't agree with your statement to introduce your poem, nor the blame you put on the individual in the poem itself. -- Posted by heavyrhythm at 1:44 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:43 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 4:42 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:41 pm on July 9, 2009 Null, because there is no "you fucking suck dick bitch" option.   I hate shit like this.   It's awful. So much rhyming I could puke.   And don't bash cutters, you don't know their personal problems. I take it you are one?? Are "one"? Like it's a group. Do not talk to me if you are ignorant to the subject you are trying to prove a point on. Ohkay. So you cut yourself??? Why??? Does leaving scars make you feel better about your problems. It just makes you look ugly. It's stupid. -- Posted by Kaijuu at 1:45 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 1:43 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Kaijuu at 1:42 pm on July 9, 2009 Talking does not help everyone     But leaving PERMANENT scars for TEMPORARY problems is stupid IMO. yeah IYO some people like scars and scars can be removed or people can use bio-oil or cocoa butter. If they don't want them. -- Posted by Areola at 1:45 pm on July 9, 2009 Did I ever say I cut myself? I did not. Don't assume things you dumb fucking twat. -- Posted by heavyrhythm at 1:46 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:45 pm on July 9, 2009 Did I ever say I cut myself? I did not. Don't assume things you dumb fucking twat. So if you don't cut yourself... Why encourage people who do? I mean... Encouraging people to harm themselves just because they have personal problems isn't right??? But I guess we'll never agree. So I'll stop argueing with a child on the internet. -- Posted by ToyJetpack at 1:48 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 4:46 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:45 pm on July 9, 2009 Did I ever say I cut myself? I did not.    Don't assume things you dumb fucking twat. So if you don't cut yourself... Why encourage people who do? I mean... Encouraging people to harm themselves just because they have personal problems isn't right??? But I guess we'll never agree. So I'll stop argueing with a child on the internet. LINK ME TO THE POST WHERE SHE ENCOURAGED ANYTHING, IDIOT -- Posted by Just Waiting Here at 1:50 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 1:43 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Kaijuu at 1:42 pm on July 9, 2009 Talking does not help everyone     But leaving PERMANENT scars for TEMPORARY problems is stupid IMO. Just like drinking until you're drunk, smoking until you're high, walking alone at night, or not studying for a test can be stupid to someone else.  For some, talking to someone that won't listen or doesn't understand is stupid. Temporary problems?  Quite a few individuals who cut aren't doing so because something bad just happened to them.  Depression doesn't come around because of a temporary problem, nor does there even have to be a clear cut 'problem' that requires sadness over it. Some of those people that cut as well do so to keep from doing something as drastic as suicide.  Cutting can release certain things in your body that actually help make you feel better.  For some, it overrides emotional pain, and can help them clear their mind. At the end of the day, everyone responds differently to problems.  Do something?  Some people can't afford to go see doctors.  Some people have no one to talk to... some who do try and talk to people are ignored or criticized. You also have to realize that the physical pain created by cutting is often nothing when compared to the emotional pain that they are going through. -- Posted by Areola at 1:51 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 4:46 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:45 pm on July 9, 2009 Did I ever say I cut myself? I did not.    Don't assume things you dumb fucking twat. So if you don't cut yourself... Why encourage people who do? I mean... Encouraging people to harm themselves just because they have personal problems isn't right??? But I guess we'll never agree. So I'll stop argueing with a child on the internet. I never encouraged any type of harm. And I am not arguing with you, you'd know if I was. I'm just telling you if you don't understand something, don't bash it. Until you have actually done this or are very close to someone who has, you will not understand. I am merely trying to educate you. -- Posted by heavyrhythm at 1:52 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:51 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 4:46 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:45 pm on July 9, 2009 Did I ever say I cut myself? I did not.   Don't assume things you dumb fucking twat. So if you don't cut yourself... Why encourage people who do? I mean... Encouraging people to harm themselves just because they have personal problems isn't right??? But I guess we'll never agree. So I'll stop argueing with a child on the internet. I never encouraged any type of harm. And I am not arguing with you, you'd know if I was. I'm just telling you if you don't understand something, don't bash it. Until you have actually done this or are very close to someone who has, you will not understand. I am merely trying to educate you. I have cut myself before. And afterwards I realized how stupid it was. I have nasty, ugly scars on my arms because of it. I hate myself for it and I don't know how anyone could ever do it. I just think its stupid and scary and it doesn't help anything. -- Posted by Areola at 1:54 pm on July 9, 2009 You don't know how anyone could ever do it but yet you've done it? This screams contradiction. -- Posted by heavyrhythm at 1:57 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:54 pm on July 9, 2009 You don't know how anyone could ever do it but yet you've done it? This screams contradiction. Exactly. I did it, because I'd heard and thought and beleived that it would make me feel better. And after I did it... I didn't know how anyone could do it or ever think it would help. It was stupid. -- Posted by Just Waiting Here at 1:59 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 1:57 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:54 pm on July 9, 2009 You don't know how anyone could ever do it but yet you've done it? This screams contradiction. Exactly. I did it, because I'd heard and thought and beleived that it would make me feel better. And after I did it... I didn't know how anyone could do it or ever think it would help. It was stupid. You tried it... thought it was stupid and stopped.  Others have tried it, and even if they don't think it's good... they keep going with it.  Just because something didn't work for you doesn't mean it would work for others.  You comment on scars, but some people don't care... other people like them. We're not saying that cutting is a good thing to do, or it's smart, or it works.  We're saying that comments like, "it's stupid" often times has a complete lack of understanding on that individuals part. You said you cut because you thought it would help you from things you've ~heard~... but what about those people that feel like they ~have~ to cut or feel compelled to cut.  It's much different than just thinking, "let me try this and see if it helps". -- Posted by Areola at 2:00 pm on July 9, 2009 Because you just did it because you thought it was the "thing" to do. You did it for the wrong reasons, just to seem like you fit in. It's not about helping erase what's going on in that persons life. It's about bringing peace and letting the person forget about everything that's going on for a little while. And honestly, that's all they want. They just want to forget. Cutting gives that to them. -- Posted by Kaijuu at 2:01 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 1:57 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:54 pm on July 9, 2009 You don't know how anyone could ever do it but yet you've done it? This screams contradiction. Exactly. I did it, because I'd heard and thought and beleived that it would make me feel better. And after I did it... I didn't know how anyone could do it or ever think it would help. It was stupid. So what? It wasn't right for YOU but there are people who do it and it makes THEM feel better. -- Posted by heavyrhythm at 2:05 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Kaijuu at 2:01 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 1:57 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:54 pm on July 9, 2009 You don't know how anyone could ever do it but yet you've done it? This screams contradiction. Exactly. I did it, because I'd heard and thought and beleived that it would make me feel better. And after I did it... I didn't know how anyone could do it or ever think it would help. It was stupid. So what? It wasn't right for YOU but there are people who do it and it makes THEM feel better. I'll never understand how you could condone this. -- Posted by Just Waiting Here at 2:08 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 2:05 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Kaijuu at 2:01 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 1:57 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:54 pm on July 9, 2009 You don't know how anyone could ever do it but yet you've done it? This screams contradiction. Exactly. I did it, because I'd heard and thought and beleived that it would make me feel better. And after I did it... I didn't know how anyone could do it or ever think it would help. It was stupid.    So what? It wasn't right for YOU but there are people who do it and it makes THEM feel better. I'll never understand how you could condone this. Again... no one's saying that cutting is encouraged, or it's a good way to cope.  But that doesn't mean we can't understand why people cut. Someone that already has some form of depression is rarely ever helped when an individual tells them that what they are doing is stupid.  Some that cut already feel guiltly about it, but they can't seem to find a way to stop.  Hearing that it's stupid, only makes things worse... it rarely solves the problem or makes anyone stop. -- Posted by Kaijuu at 2:11 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 2:05 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Kaijuu at 2:01 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from heavyrhythm at 1:57 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from Katx at 1:54 pm on July 9, 2009 You don't know how anyone could ever do it but yet you've done it? This screams contradiction. Exactly. I did it, because I'd heard and thought and beleived that it would make me feel better. And after I did it... I didn't know how anyone could do it or ever think it would help. It was stupid.    So what? It wasn't right for YOU but there are people who do it and it makes THEM feel better. I'll never understand how you could condone this. Because it makes some people feel better. -- Posted by blackbandaid at 2:25 pm on July 9, 2009 I don't think cutting is a good thing to do, but that doesn't mean I think that those who do are stupid, or can't understand why they would do it. I think you're just angry and embarrassed that you tried it once, and you're trying to deflect those feelings onto other cutters by putting them down. Pages: 1 2  Next