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-- Posted by XxRedneckBitchxX at 1:42 pm on July 9, 2009
Go to sleep and close your teary eyes Never again wake to see the night Hush little girl don't you dare cry Sit back and enjoy your final night Here we are once again All alone with no friends They let you bleed and said not a word Not really knowing how depression hurts A Cutters' Lullaby Screaming in your ear All the things you hate to hear The names the accusations and suggestions Suffering from hard learned lessons Can anybody hear you now? Your mouth is open, tihnk you are screaming so loud But a sound doesnt escape your pretty lips And you just let the knife slip A Cutters' Lullaby Can anyone see her here? Down on her knees and the end so near Invisible in such a crowded place Eyes just sliding over her tear streaked place Under the shadow of the steeple Passed by the forgiven people Holding the razor so close, and in her hand her final letter All these people who never even met her A Cutters' Lullaby I sit here with nothing to hold on to But this blade and you want to take that away too I am alone and I have nowhere to turn How many lessons must I be forced to learn? And in the dead silence on the night I hear the sounds of my own distant cries Singing a tune noone else seems to know And its one I wish I never had to know A Cutters' Lullaby
-- Posted by heavyrhythm at 1:45 pm on July 9, 2009
This is really good. Wow.
-- Posted by ehmusic at 1:47 pm on July 9, 2009
A lot of your lines have awkward diction and/or syntax, and it comes through.
-- Posted by xxXemoXxx at 1:48 pm on July 9, 2009
awwwww. that was good
-- Posted by tragic romance at 3:59 pm on July 10, 2009
Wow it's amazing
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