-- Posted by heavyrhythm at 1:50 pm on July 9, 2009 This song is about my biological father. People say I was molested by him, but I don't remember it. I hate him because he asked my (step)dad (I call him my dad because he's been in my life since I was 4.) to adopt my sister and I because he didn't want to pay child support. I mean, I'm his daughter. I just thought it was really shitty. I am the tongue That tells your lie I am the fear You try to hide I am the child You concieve I am the thoughts That you believe I am the one You smile too I have thoughts I hate you -- Posted by DaisyMontana at 1:51 pm on July 9, 2009 hates it -- Posted by XxRedneckBitchxX at 1:52 pm on July 9, 2009 I think you force the rhyme to muchh, I have a poem of the same nature. Sometimes free verse works best. want me to post for you? -- Posted by IGotAddicted at 1:52 pm on July 9, 2009 6 -- Posted by Chasey at 1:53 pm on July 9, 2009 sgood -- Posted by heavyrhythm at 1:53 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from XxRedneckBitchxX at 1:52 pm on July 9, 2009 I think you force the rhyme to muchh, I have a poem of the same nature. Sometimes free verse works best. want me to post for you? I get htat alot actually. But honestly I don't force anything. I don't really sit around and think "what would rhyme with X word?" yano? It just comes...