-- Posted by belizabeth at 6:30 pm on July 9, 2009 Still here Waiting here Maybe forever Never going to give up Nor stop Loving you You are the one I love I care about The one who Makes the sky seem there Makes the world stand still Makes my heart beat Like never before You are the one I am waiting for. what do you think? Is it deep? does it make sense? -- Posted by Areola at 6:31 pm on July 9, 2009 Do you plan on making writing your career? If so, DON'T. -- Posted by belizabeth at 6:33 pm on July 9, 2009 So what this poem may suck but I have others that are ten times better. -- Posted by Areola at 6:34 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from belizabeth at 9:33 pm on July 9, 2009 So what this poem may suck but I have others that are ten times better. Good! -- Posted by jsia at 6:36 pm on July 9, 2009 So show 'em to us. -- Posted by belizabeth at 6:37 pm on July 9, 2009 ok.... -- Posted by Roger25 at 10:19 pm on July 9, 2009 I like it, describes the feeling of love.  It is deep and passionate.  However it is short which is okay.  There are many short poems!  Of course it makes sense.  The message is quiet clear. A person is waiting for love.  Sometimes it is time to move on. Anyways well done.  Improve yourself, relax take your time and enjoy your life. =) -Denis R. -- Posted by belizabeth at 12:20 pm on July 10, 2009 Quote: from Roger25 at 10:19 pm on July 9, 2009 I like it, describes the feeling of love. It is deep and passionate. However it is short which is okay. There are many short poems! Of course it makes sense. The message is quiet clear. A person is waiting for love. Sometimes it is time to move on. Anyways well done. Improve yourself, relax take your time and enjoy your life. =) -Denis R. Thanks. -- Posted by Prankster28 at 3:26 am on July 11, 2009 I like it. -- Posted by belizabeth at 8:35 am on July 11, 2009 Quote: from Prankster28 at 3:26 am on July 11, 2009 I like it. Thanks.