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-- Posted by Wunarmdscissor at 12:21 pm on July 14, 2009

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-- Posted by Joep0113 at 12:21 pm on July 14, 2009

Depends on what its on...


-- Posted by Italianlnm at 12:21 pm on July 14, 2009

What is it on?


-- Posted by 218 air codet at 12:21 pm on July 14, 2009

no


-- Posted by Wunarmdscissor at 12:21 pm on July 14, 2009

Quote: from Joep0113 at 12:21 pm on July 14, 2009


Depends on what its on...

Gulliver's Travels and size.


-- Posted by y4r5xeym5 at 12:23 pm on July 14, 2009

"Hello world. I am attempting to write this paper becuase my teacher, who is admittedly a half-assed teacher, requires all of us to expand our ability to write properly in English. However, since I am lazy or slightly incompetent, I have decided that the first paragraph, the one you are seeing here, shall be written entirely by another person who I have never met. I hope you, the reader, enjoyed it.

Like that?


-- Posted by Wunarmdscissor at 12:24 pm on July 14, 2009

Quote: from y4r5xeym5 at 12:23 pm on July 14, 2009


"Hello world. I am attempting to write this paper becuase my teacher, who is admittedly a half-assed teacher, requires all of us to expand our ability to write properly in English. However, since I am lazy or slightly incompetent, I have decided that the first paragraph, the one you are seeing here, shall be written entirely by another person who I have never met. I hope you, the reader, enjoyed it.

Like that?


That's dumb. I said edit. It's always good for someone else to look over your paper.


-- Posted by y4r5xeym5 at 12:25 pm on July 14, 2009

Quote: from Wunarmdscissor at 12:24 pm on July 14, 2009


Quote: from y4r5xeym5 at 12:23 pm on July 14, 2009

"Hello world. I am attempting to write this paper becuase my teacher, who is admittedly a half-assed teacher, requires all of us to expand our ability to write properly in English. However, since I am lazy or slightly incompetent, I have decided that the first paragraph, the one you are seeing here, shall be written entirely by another person who I have never met. I hope you, the reader, enjoyed it.  

 Like that?


That's dumb. I said edit. It's always good for someone else to look over your paper.



I can't edit what hasn't been typed silly.


-- Posted by Wunarmdscissor at 12:26 pm on July 14, 2009

Quote: from y4r5xeym5 at 12:25 pm on July 14, 2009


Quote: from Wunarmdscissor at 12:24 pm on July 14, 2009

Quote: from y4r5xeym5 at 12:23 pm on July 14, 2009

"Hello world. I am attempting to write this paper becuase my teacher, who is admittedly a half-assed teacher, requires all of us to expand our ability to write properly in English. However, since I am lazy or slightly incompetent, I have decided that the first paragraph, the one you are seeing here, shall be written entirely by another person who I have never met. I hope you, the reader, enjoyed it.

  Like that?


 

 That's dumb. I said edit. It's always good for someone else to look over your paper.



I can't edit what hasn't been typed silly.

I'd send it to you but I don't think you'd take editing seriously.


-- Posted by SimShrimp at 12:26 pm on July 14, 2009

Give it to me, and we'll see if it is worth the time and effort :)


-- Posted by y4r5xeym5 at 12:27 pm on July 14, 2009

Why bother making a topic about editing your paragraph if you aren't going to take the time to make it available in the topic itself?


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