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-- Posted by amsa at 6:42 am on Dec. 24, 2006

Hell everyone
This is my first design here, you can write your opinion .
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http://images.golivewire.com/ib/106112_f.jpg

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amsa ...


-- Posted by Birdo at 6:43 am on Dec. 24, 2006

Design for what?
Just some avatar?


-- Posted by carbonara at 6:45 am on Dec. 24, 2006

There's something about it i don't like.

Also you wrote "Don not leave me".


-- Posted by imakethetest66 at 6:46 am on Dec. 24, 2006

I like it but I don't


-- Posted by atomictastic at 6:46 am on Dec. 24, 2006

I like it... looks wonderful! I'm still trying to learn how to do stuff like that.


-- Posted by amsa at 6:50 am on Dec. 24, 2006

It is just design about (Love) .
another meaning it is just idea about (Love) in designs .
Understand me ??...... i hope that .
amsa ...


-- Posted by Birdo at 6:56 am on Dec. 24, 2006

The lines could have been placed further apart, since they seem to be the focal point of the picture. If you place them apart, someone's eyes would have to cross the whole picture to be able to finish them, allowing them to actually have a reason to look at it, than to just do it out of boredom, if that makes sense. I mean, there's composition, but a person's eyes aren't led through the picture, it's just sort of there.
It's hard to explain, but I tried my best.


-- Posted by IslandAtWar at 7:14 am on Dec. 24, 2006

The bubble letters don't really fit with the overal feeling. They're kinda out of place and too bold. Otherwise not bad.


-- Posted by Newfie at 7:19 am on Dec. 24, 2006

too blury and everything looks double.d


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