-- Posted by lordofallyou at 5:56 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Ok, I made a webcomic, and I need someone to please, please proofread the grammar for me. Despite what it says on the front page, the "about us" link works. If you see a mistake, please message me or post it, you will suddenly become cool. Don't proofread the comics themselves, because I am not going to really fix images.  Also the styles don't carry over to the comics themselves yet, so don't panic about that. nerdtablecomics.com -- Posted by BREAKBOY at 6:00 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Is also Russian, less is known about her then is about C.H.A.R. Then should be than. -- Posted by Ancient Rights at 6:00 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 It looks like you're trying to copy Cyanide & Happiness. -- Posted by BREAKBOY at 6:02 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Insane, random, knows karate, also is known for killing people, mainly Tony. Not 100% if what you said is gramatically correct, but I believe "is" and "also" should be switched around. -- Posted by lordofallyou at 6:03 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 never saw that comic, lol,  but wanna post a link? I'll change the layout -- Posted by lordofallyou at 6:03 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Oh, and thanks, I'll fix that -- Posted by BREAKBOY at 6:07 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Quote: from Breakboy at 6:00 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Is also Russian, less is known about her then is about C.H.A.R. Then should be than. Actually, I'd also make it say, "Less is known about her than is known about C.H.A.R." -- Posted by BREAKBOY at 6:08 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Quote: from lordofallyou at 6:03 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 never saw that comic, lol,  but wanna post a link? I'll change the layout Don't worry, it's no C&H ripoff. -- Posted by DJ Josh at 6:17 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Has potential, keep it up. -- Posted by techiejunk at 4:11 am on Feb. 29, 2008 Holy shit that sucked. None of your links work, they all go back to your host. You posted the same news twice... and, there is a shitty design...