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-- Posted by Fauna at 5:54 pm on April 27, 2008

for daniel (or "with no punctuation for you to put in your own breaths")

how lovely you are
when viewed from a distance
your teeth sparkle
like something sparkly

oh to kiss your elbow
is to taste that sugary sweet
which is so icy and fresh
and makes me lick my lips

or up close I can see
your most tiny of hairs
I give a tingly touch
to make your tiniest of hairs
stand on their tiniest of ends


-- Posted by Gonzalo at 4:40 pm on June 20, 2008

Fauna = hot


-- Posted by Bobster the Lobster at 10:37 pm on June 24, 2008

I'm impressed. I like it a lot.


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